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FFx: YuNa :charcoal by ~ne-ja:iconne-ja:

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wak!
my first charcoal drawing!

please! i need your critique on this! :D

i think my shadings are too dark. gah. its my first time..

its the scene where tidus and yuna just first me.. i bet you knew that.. ;p .. shes not my very favorite girl charac but i really like her in ten.. ;p
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derwent charcoal pencil .. light , medium

cotton .. i like using cotton than tissues , my fingers ang a hankie.. i did practiced.. ;p


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thanks for everything!!

this is for yuna - fans and to evryone! ;p

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please criticize.. i wanna improve.. :D

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=17th May 31, 2006, 7:06:25 AM
This is really good o.o Pretty eye-catching somehow XD

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~VelveteenCrush May 31, 2006, 7:06:55 AM
How pretty. Yuna is my favorite from the game. Cotton, there's an idea for blending, if only I had any.

I'll just say that for your first charcoal, this is really good. I have never been able to do something in charcoal that doesn't look obscenely smudgy. This looks smooth and well done, and the lines are very fine. And I especially love her hair.

As for the shadows being too dark, I don't think so. I always shade dark though, so I'm a bit biased.

Great work, keep it up. :)

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~WadeVesecha May 31, 2006, 7:30:58 AM
wow.... alam na alam ko tong scene na to kasi poster ko to sa kwarto ko dati :giggle: eto yung pagkalabas niya dun sa room ni valefor di ba?

para sa kin maganda na yung kinalabasan :w00t: nadistingushed naman yung lips sa skin kahit dark ang shading mo kaya ayos na ayos :horns: di naman gano halata pero yung ilong lang yung medyo may error sa tingin ko. hawak ko kasi poster ngayon eh. pero ayos tong ngawa mo :headbang: CHARCOAL TO KAYA ANG MASASABI KO LANG >>>:worship: natry ko na magcharcoal at masasabi kong mahirap ngang gawin yan :w00t:

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~ashturil May 31, 2006, 8:12:41 AM
HOLEEE... *faves*

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~noir-kreuz May 31, 2006, 8:23:08 AM
wow! galing! :clap: kahit na mejo dark nga nagawa mong paangatin ung drawing! gawd! hirap nyan sa charcoal. :worship:

ung sa hair mejo nga dark.. mejo kulang sa shine. pero ayus lng! :w00t:

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